My sails would be your sweetest tears, cascading from sad eyes
My winds would be the moments between your soften cries,
Our destination calls to me through torrents of endless bliss,
Our passion keeps us safe and warm within this endless kiss,
You ask Five things ...yet I give you one, love under a our very own sentual silent sun...
Author notes
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5025525
A contest entry
- Cruise Round Two (Invite Only) by Riftkin.
700 points, ended February 25, 2009, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i loved the last line. she asked you 5 things, but she got 1 reply to all. i love that, very moving piece. nice work
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Wow~
Oh My Brother this is certainly a Beauty and Love the imagery also the words weaved~ Wonderful essentials to take on the cruise
Bravo! Sorry it took me awhile to comment- I was offline for a bit but still working through notes 
Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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This was wonderful, in all the soft little things
you would bring with you on a romantic cruise.
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