remember is a site of times
to help us to remind us of our love
ones and the ones that we hate to
think of.
painless memory is what i have of you
a memory that would live on forever in
my thoughts and passion for
you.
the things that i do reminds me of you
what we did when we was together in life
the walk in the park, going of town doing the
weekends, and even going to the fair.
the memory that i have of you would never
desapate from my memory's of you.
even though we are no longer here with us
your faith and memory's are here to stay
with me until the end of times
in loving memory to my friend,son,brother
i will always love you
A contest entry
- In Loving Memory... by Timeless Wisdom.
22250 points, ended March 23, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
in love with sin
Comments
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A strong emotional poetry onece again..love its depth and its tone and flow..well done..thanks for sharing a effective poetry..
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Its sad
This is a very very well written poem. The whole this just leaks the emotione felt. Theses are my favorite kinds of poems.
"even though we are no longer here with us
your faith and memory's are here to stay
with me until the end of times"
This line however really did not make a whole lot of sense. Im not sure if you meant to write it this way or not but i thought i would poiunt it out ust in case you really didnt meanto write it that way.
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From Michael:
"Hello Gloria! First, I love your purple rose background! You seem to be very reminiscent, thinking back and reflecting upon memories, both good and bad. I myself am a very reminiscent person...we remember so that we never forget. Thank you for your poem and God Bless." -
Thank you for your entry. Aside from a few spelling corrections...this was a very nice write. I can see it being a part of this dedicatitve book.
~Raymond~
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