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Bearer...



Elk~belly rawhide
stretched tanned soft
...

Eagle claw
dress coyote fur~
bone, stone
...

Brother Bear offers teeth
...

gone
.
Slow hot bore
slow resin soaked in herbs
long sweet
sweet
peace
...

Beaded bag
Wandering Warrior
Sturdy pony


A mission

...

a long sweet pull




A contest entry

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  • RockSteady
    May 14, 2009
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    you rock

    what can i say D, I CAN T TOUCH YOUR PEN


  • AmazinJason
    March 9, 2009

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    I picture a native american indian with an all-natural old-school peace pipe ...
    there's a lot to ponder upon,
    the purpose is kind of blurry,
    maybe the mission needs better explanation...
    well thank you for this peaceful scene


    • MissHapps
      March 15, 2009
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      An Honor and more...

      The mission indeed needs to deliver more detail ahead of itself...


  • Lion-Serpent
    February 18, 2009

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    I really enjoyed this. It was very animistic, which is something I can heavily understand. You captured the feel of snippets perfectly. Nice end.