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Your little guardian

Please Michael
don't be sad
you see I'm in heaven now
walking beside Jesus.

He's showing me around up here
and says for me not to worry.

He said that I could come visit
you, mommy, and daddy too
in your dreams.

And that I could be with you always
as your guardian angel
watching over you
guiding you
loving you.

So you see
no reason to be sad
I'm doing alright here
and I get to see you
and if you close your eyes
and think of me
I'll be there...
walking beside you.

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I hope this makes michael feel a little better about his brothers death.

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  • PoeticMadnesss
    February 22

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    so beautifully written, it gave me chills and made me tear up. i'm sure he will appreciate your poem. best of luck in the contest


  • jenadyleigh silver member
    February 21

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    beautiful poem! well written and heartfelt. I love this piece. The background the words. everything, PERFECT! Well done!


  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    February 19

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    Thank you for your entry and dedication. Michael said thank you and he does love your poem He feels blessed by your poem.

    Thank you...
    ~Raymond and Michael~


    • trekkergirl
      February 19
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      I am glad that he liked it. I hope he does better. It is very rough when children loose people close to them. Give him an extra special hug from me.