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Harvest

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”Do you want warm pearls on your lips”
he asks
and there I am, aching for gems
like whispers from the  soul
      where kisses brush everything in between


That overwhelming adjunct
with its skills of artistic wonderment -
conjuring up the salacious hint of arousal
it grows - fast as lightening
and furiously firm -
anxious and playful, soft as a silk worm
dark crimson and grab-it grape
                                    pink with strain
tender-skinned and mushroom-headed
tonguey
and hard in the artist's hand
full of gush-awaiting girth and
                                oh, so lovely


Painting his sweet self on my skin
a wizardry of width
peeled back with numb perambulatory exertion
          that slippery slickness of anticipation
                inviting my mouth to wrap around it
                        in hot-lipped pretension
                              to harvest
                                  the cream of the crop...






















Harvest
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Author notes

I't all about ART, people...

Image> Dylan Ricci - Gallery 7

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  • CaliOkie silver member
    March 8

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    Well deserved gold. It has been said that all art is an act of sex. I guess the reverse may be true as well.

    This is so perfectly done . . . explicit without being crass; sensual without being cloying . . . pure, perfect erotica. It is difficult to balance along that fine line and not go too far . . . sex with taste (oh, that's a pun, sorry).

    Excellent.

    Garrison


  • Balldinger silver member
    February 25
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    Who's Art?


  • Skybow silver member
    February 23
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    Congratulations on the well deserved Gold.
    This was a Awesome poem!


  • Blue Rew silver member
    February 22

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    Who would be able to resist?
    Certainly not myself with my attraction for colour and this being so ripened by it amidst other elements. This one literally builds, creates a tension in the reader and the ending is supreme release. The kind of write that urges me to thread more of my theme onto seductive tapestries.
    Blue

  • Skybow silver member
    February 22

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    Earthy rockin' passion, loved the write! My favorite stanza the last:

    Painting his sweet self on my skin
    a wizardry of width
    peeled back with numb perambulatory exertion
    that slippery slickness of anticipation
    inviting my mouth to wrap around it
    in hot-lipped pretension
    to harvest
    the cream of the crop...


  • jcat gold member
    February 19
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    The most beautiful of art!!! I am in awe......

  • Artistically warm in shades of responsive white.

    great job


  • quietly burning
    February 18
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    lol at the comment ... yes so true but Oh how imperfect we all are.


  • Balldinger silver member
    February 18
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    woah! you said pearls... hot fired and blue-stew stirred. wow...

  • Rowan gold member
    February 18
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    feels warm in here...
    lol. Yep. Art.
    Well done.

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