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The Ruiner Hunter

The urge is deep, won't go away
It's so justified--what I seek,
The corrupt, the greedy,
I'll kill for the meek:

A death no one saw,
Because of what's at my feet
The blood washes away
The repugnance I feel
Until

The desire seems to go, then
Only to return as another
Future death I see
In a figure's eye

Haunting me,
I reflect on me
The urge grows
Until I can't see
The mirror

Where gently I can touch
Gentle lines of empathy
Of the broken pieces
Of me shattering
Another neck
Another speck
That only ate the human condition
Dead of its own premonition

Macrophage, I am the antibody
Of the human system
Red blood cells on my shirt
The fashion of the hunter
The markings of eternal war
Against what shouldn't be
I slaughter, I free
I cut open the center of the head
To open the third eyes of the ignorant
In their death knells of surprise

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  • PoeticMadnesss
    February 18, 2009

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    ahh interesting signature if i read it correctly. cutting someone's head to make them "open minded", to free them from being ignorant. great flow to the poem. i wish you luck in the contest!


    • Lion-Serpent
      February 18, 2009
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      Actually, I meant cutting open the third eye. In more scientific terms, that means cutting open the pineal gland, which rests in the centre of the head and naturally produces DMT, a tryptamine that is heavily psychedelic and which also occurs naturally in many plant species.


      • PoeticMadnesss
        February 18, 2009
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        oh o.O i see. *runs off to wikipedia or learn more*
        i learn something new everyday!