darkness is leaking through the twilight
its going from white morning into black night
this is the time vampires play
werewolves patrol
and humans sleep untill day
cullen and black fight over a pearl
a precious gem,a teenage girl
werewolf and vampire
natural born enemies
forced to together by living fire
the fire stays true to
isabella swan
werewolfs love
vampires food pearl on fire burning away only darkness inside her but the light awaits
Author notes
this is painfuly pathetic
A contest entry
- Twilight-The Safest Time Of Day by SingMeToSleep.
850 points, ended March 3, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I'd love to know what you think..am I good for my age? okay okay this took me forever to put together it sucks i know but i can't help it.....lol
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Ella! -
I don't think it's panifully pathetic. Sure, there's room for improvement, but this is really good for someone your age. There were some spelling and grammar mistakes. A suggestion I have is to have someone look over your poems. An extra set of eyes can help you catch any careless mistakes.
Thank you for entering and good luck.
-SingMeToSleep- -
It's fine work for any age. Keep at it!
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