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Gutei and his Finger

Horizontal contemplations,
Particles existing, changing;
There is no pattern,
There is only change.
I do not exist, neither do you;
We are the fingertips of the universe.
Do you understand?
You are the fucking universe!
I am everything beautiful about the world,
Yet I am everything ugly,
I am Hitler, I am Jesus,
I merely am.
In the absence of thought,
I am.

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  • cosmotion
    March 6
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    hahahahahahahawusdhlajkdhkajdh


    it's waking up