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Inimitable Me!

I never fit into
Anyone’s mould

If I do so
It may be for
only few sides
not the whole

Being a complex package
I live the way
I live

Never had I put
My extra ounce of energy
To read a man’s nature

I accept people
As they are
I understand them all
As a good human

I never hurt
Anyone in this world
My limits never
Overlap with anyone’s edge.

I don’t mind
Calling a spade a spade
I don't wear a mask
Anymore

The comments are like
I am a fool
Wasting my life
Talking useless
Thinking beyond limits

Happy am I
I thank them all
For not so unique
That I prove
Myself as an individual
With individuality

Author notes

Just wanted to share my experience of 'Being Myself' . I am from south India where lifestlye is different and girls/woman can't express their views that easily... I started living my life (whereas most of the people, in here, simply exist and pretend to be living) since my college days... I thank my professor Dr.CRS at this time - but for her i would not have known what life is. only two persons in my life understand and accept me as I am - My mom and my hubby. My hubby is as unique as I am, but our tastes and ideas differ... and we are happy with and proud of each others individuality


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  • Catz95
    February 18

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    Thanks for entering, I like hearing inspirational stories like yours.=]

    I like the acknowlogement you made that though you're part of society, there's no one quite like you. The transitions between stanzas are nice, and your message is a good one. I congradulate you for breaking the mold and becoming what makes you happy.

    Just a small nitpick, I believe in the second line you misspelled 'mold' as 'mould', but again thats just something small.

    I'm glad you entered, you brought something special to the contest. Good luck with everything, and the contest. <3


    • Kiddy
      February 18
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      I appreciate your thoughtful comment... I am so happy that you liked the little poem...

      Note : I am sure, mould is a variant of mold...I was taught to use English words that are chiefly British...so sometimes I follow British English spelling, though I am aware of American spelling...

      Thanks again...

      Love and regards
      Kiddy