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Poetic Dreams~

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Dizzy delights of double chocolate cream,

cherry rose colored hearts of sugar spice.

Saturate with vanilla in-between,

Mushy’s Kingdom seeks angelic advice.

 

Sensual scenery of silken flesh,

petals on beauty bestow feathered soul

With each passing breath , today I confess,

my emotions sometimes lose their control.

 

So I follow the love of angel’s feet,

searching for wings of an eagle once more

Butterfly kisses tingle my heartbeat,

as I knock, knock, knock on heaven’s door.

 

Walking the pathway of life till I fly,

I embrace true love you grace with your eyes.

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Prompt: the distance to your heart is just a dream away.

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  • Angelflower
    March 6
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    This was just so beautiful.. I loved the flow and the imagery, the way your words just moved along and read so softly, I truly enjoyed reading this.. You did such a wonderful job.. Really captured the prompt.. Thank you very much for your entry, best of luck in the contest.

    Angel


  • Rose Angel gold member
    February 27

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    Magnificently Romantic!

    Ah....so heavenly a write...I am flying with the words..So many lines, are ethereally captivating and your imagery as well..."So I follow the love of angel's feet, butterfly kisses tingle my heartbeat, as I knock , knock , knock on heaven's door."
    Captivatingly Gorgeous write!..Bookmarking!


  • Jalalbad gold member
    February 22
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    Left said it all, I can say nothing but agree with him. good luck in contest sweet poet


  • Stardust-luvr
    February 18

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    so many lines leave me in awwee that the passionate spirit exudes from your soul to your mighty pen you have a incredible way with words that bring me into your words with such imagery - there are so many lines that touch my soul that even some brought forth tears well done and many blessings always xxxxx love you Bro xxx

    PS *** waves white flag in surrender as mine floats away on a dream compared to yours ***


  • Ephiphany
    February 18

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    Standing ovation my Poetic Brother

    good luck, this is beautiful. Love the image as well

    -e


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    February 18
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    This is truly a blissful piece, very well thought out, great imagery.


  • Lonely
    February 18

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    We poets actually never have our emotions in control This is a terrific piece of poetry dear hubby.. Soft and romantic, walking the pathway of life till I fly..
    Wow, what a pretty line this is, you never cease to amuse me.. Keep writing!

    Love you
    Lonely Wifey


  • Denerica
    February 18

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    Oh, How beautiful, breathtaking and it does flow so exquisitely. Really loved this piece. Blessings.


  • StarEyes
    February 18

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    Oh my! What a wonderful read this one is! *sigh* Just beautiful! This is fantastic. I love the images you create with these words!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • rite
    February 18

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    You express mankind's greatest talent - the ability to love - in a most wonderful way. I am glad to see you in a mood to write about this soothing marvel. Thank you for creating and sharing and I hope you do well in the contest. Take care.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    February 18

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    Simply beautiful and a wonderfully written
    piece bro! I love the way that you wrote this.
    Very creative and filled with some great imagery.
    I hope that you are well and wish you all the best
    in this contest. Take care and thanks a lot for
    sharing this one with us all here!




    Jeremy0826


  • EeyoreUK
    February 18

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    an array of vivid imagery my friend. your poetic pen never ceases to flow and the poems never cease to amaze.

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