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Roses (ya)

Roses can be red,
but violets are always blue.
I'm laying awake in bed,
too bad for you.

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  • Shakari
    February 24

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    lol...Nice! You are rather witty, Mollie. Soooo....who did you write this for? lol Anyway, I liked the rhyming abab scheme, and the detail. I hope to see more from you soon!