It's here where she ripens to Gold
lingering ~
with luscious Juice overflowing
a deeper red
like the full Pomegranate between her sigh ~
bending softly across the smoky town.
One glimpse of peach blossoms
and he'll climb
higher than before
to crush her vine within his mouth...
Author notes
credit artist: http://darkgoth.deviantart.com/art/New-York-Reflection-47447980
A contest entry
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700 points, ended February 18, 2009, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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Beautiful
Super yummy


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Congrats on the worthy gold.
Divine.

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A hot fruity piece beautifully penned
Best wishes and good luck
Julie
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Oh my! The imagery just paints the images in the mind! Delicious!






