We're sitting, just you and me, and the breeze lightly blows your hair.
I can see the reflection of the moon in your eyes, they twinkle and they're like my own personal stars.
You say, "I will love you forever." and I can tell that you mean it.
My gaze meets yours, and for a split second in time, I have no worries and no regrets.
Everything is absolutely content.
You gently rub my face with your hand and I can't help but to lean into your touch.
As you lean in to kiss me, my stomach gently flutters with butterflies, and I never want this to end.
Your gentle embrace feels like feathers brushing against my lips, and it is total serenity.
This is the perfect moment.
A contest entry
- This One's For The Ladies!♥ by Kathraina.
490 points, ended March 3, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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this is very sweet, thank you
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First off, thank you for entering my contest. Greatly appreciated. I really felt the emotion and i could picture a couple doing this. This is great. You have some talent.
Your Judge
kaycee
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God this is sooo romantic. The imagery is so real. It seems men (atleast me) feel the same way with love.
"The perfect Moment. I suspect this would stand alone with just the title!
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Aww *sigh*
So beautiful.
A lovely write, great imagery and emotion in this piece.
Thanks for entering and good luck
♥ Kathraina
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