Crimson soaks epidermis
as sexual tensions rise
giving more leeway
to coat my soul with antiquities
caress sensual desires forever
Here, and now
Paint my body
in blood toned hues
Author notes
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb104/Beloved_Darkness/Passion.jpg
A contest entry
- 30/10/30 by wildflower..
575 points, ended February 18, 2009, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Interesting?
Comments
1 - 6 of 6
-
hehehe
love the title lol great job with this piece great job for the contest keep it up keep on going stay true stay sic peace out and have a nice day -
to coat my soul with antiquities
i love this line its very sexy
a very good poem thats to be interpreted in many ways it comes across as sexy to me, melton chocolate body paint
abigail
-
epidermis in all those romantic words you stuck epidermis the nurse in me had to smile. I loved it.
-
great write... body paint anyone
good luck
-
Oooh I sense passion!
Fantastic job with the prompt!
-
Coolio!
Adding your comment:
1 - 6 of 6
