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Sorority Countdown

Guttural internal explosions
wracking frail and flimsy frames
Burning away the innocence
so carefully maintained

Voices of soothing advice
offered by a monotonous beat
Leading to an effervescent harmony
attainable not by any small feat

Pleasant insanity arises
out of the chaos sown
The dreamy release welcomed
and reality disowned

Author notes

*one-sided love*

Brief little idea came to me from....
Glittering Cloud - Imogen Heap
Must Be Dreaming - Frou Frou

A little sick, so not top material but still decent I hope

A contest entry

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  • WOW!! PRETTY AWESOME WRITE. YEAH IT IS DECENT AND I LOVE IT... EXCELLENT JOB AND 10X 4 ENTERING MY CONTEST