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Girl

A bed of silk,
A heart so warm,
A silver blade,
Runs up her arm,
Caressing the veins,
In every part,
Making her scream,
Making her shout.
The crimson red,
Seeps down her bed,
Surrounding her,
A pool of dread,
Her eyes drop like lead,
The light flickering out,
Tonight’s the end.

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  • paul claxton
    November 2, 2009
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    wow,this indeed is dark but very well written , i,m gonna have to up my game


  • Myth Of Twilight
    March 18, 2009

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    Beautiful Silence

    this was quite a work of art with such wlel with a beautiful set of the darker side behind it good work keep writeing i can git use to reading this stuff
    best of luck
    Kigi


  • Raivyn
    March 16, 2009
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    EEP!

    Pacy and brilliant... I like it.


  • Werewolf Avarus
    March 1, 2009
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    Oooohhhh well written and worded, flows very nicely.

    Luv Kate


  • Scarlet-Raven
    February 18, 2009

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    O.O oh my.. very good lol but im still waiting for a nice happy poem

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