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Suicidal Martyrdom

Blended differences between right and wrong
seemed oblivious to the fact
that all is as it should be
(and the camera rolls on and on)

Author notes

The Only Difference Between Martyrdom And Suicide Is Press Coverage - Panic! At The Disco song title

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  • GoodbyeFarewell
    February 20, 2009

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    wow

    love it again with the short ones but truly amazing i love it great job keep it up keep on going stay true stay sic peace out and have a nice day


  • ladyhelenaofsorrows
    February 20, 2009

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    Very interesting! Simply stated and powerful, I really like this piece. Thank you for entering it. The camera reference spoke to me, in particular. Love that song, too . I'm adding you to the finalists' list.
    -Lena


  • Cynthia Gaines
    February 20, 2009

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    Interestingly, convincingly real, as only you can say it...

    Good luck in the contest!! Peace always, xx Cyn xx


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    February 17, 2009
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    That was interesting AND good!


  • jcat gold member
    February 17, 2009

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    I really like this!!! Nothing we do matters....life will continue to go on even if we are not here!! Wonderfully done and best wishes!!


  • just weak hands
    February 17, 2009

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    I had a good take on the prompt ?
    Mine was like crap compared to yours ! [Pardon my French ]

    This was excellent ! Brilliant take on the prompt, yourself. Definitely beat mine ! Flows very well and is just plain great !

    Best of luck in the contest !


  • wildflower. gold member
    February 17, 2009
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    Oooh I love this!
    Rolls off the tongue very well,
    and a fantastic take on the prompt!

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