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Sugar Coated Candy Pop

Sugar coated candy pops
Solved every fault
Skinned knees, doctors appointments
They were always there to please

But as each year passed
That candy disappeared
I was told to toughen up
And wipe away those tears

But teenager years hit with a bang
And that candy came right back
No longer sweet and happy
But thrusting while I was on my knees

I went along with whatever he asked
‘Cause there was one thing I would need
Those five minutes of being held
To forget the nightmares in my dreams

But that emptiness always came back
The more and more I got used
My life got worse with each and every
Sugar coated candy pop

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  • daemonfae
    February 25
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    Thank you for sharing this.

  • Papagallo
    February 25

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    You are saying alot here in the words of your poem. I like the way your went from the candy of the doctor's visit to the candy you became addicted to. Great work, I see no need for revision.