I love the way you hate me,
Scream at me and rape me,
This is no debate,
but I can’t help the way I feel you,
I love when you get angry,
Shouting that you hate me,
Retaliate this fist of yours,
These bruises on my body,
Purple 'cause I love you,
Black and blue,
I love you too,
Bleeding when I want you,
Want me,
I taste you,
Love me when I love you,
Hold me when I’m beaten,
Forgive me for angering you,
Say sorry after hurting me.
Just love me how I love you,
Feel the way I feel here,
Promise you wont leave me
And I’ll be fine when my heart heals.
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This is nice...
emotive but not sappy and imaginative...got some style to it, not the run in the mill same ole, same ole.
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yeah, but my moms words were "disterbing" lol
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I like this one it's good but u should add a little more to it, it just might sound better =)
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aye it just might, thanks I will work on it.
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i love this! it's so... different. kinda visual, like you're standing there smiling with a hole in your heart for this person that is screaming at you and beating you. srry, it's what i saw.
kAsSiE
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haha doesn't sound to different to how I was writing it lol
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wow, sorry. that sux.
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heres the thiing i liek it but i had to change my age because im only 13 and i coudnt vue it did you kwno that this fuckes up a contest.. that if you dont vew all you cant judge thats not cool next time think about if its apropriate before you put it in a contest
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uh... most the time it tells you if its ok to put in an under age contest, thats weird. SOrry mate. Though I cant realy see why its not vewible for you lol
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Oh my lanta i think i just may be obsessed with this one... i love it!
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haha thanks, this one was my first creeper one I think lol, which is weird cuase... im kind of a creeper lol
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