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Heart's Whisper

Whisper soft, whisper true
Whisper that you love me too
Then rest your dreams upon my chest
Nestled in our lover's nest
And trust in me, as I in you

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  • wtchr
    February 21
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    LINDA !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *grin*

    You've certainly made my day with your kindness. Thank you so much for the sweetest of comments from the sweetest of friends


  • jasminerose
    February 20

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    This is soooo sweet and so romantic!! Swooning hearts again with your words
    Beautiful!
    Linda


  • HaleyMary
    February 17

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    This is beautiful. I like the flow and expression of emotion. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

    Haley Mary


  • Paloszoo gold member
    February 17

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    Fantastic rhythm and rhyme in this short, sweet piece! Nicely done. Thanks for writing for my contest. Good luck. I'm honored to have you show your work here.

    • wtchr
      February 18
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      GOODNESS ! ! !

      Arzab ... what a warm comment! Thank you. I appreciate your wish for good luck in the contest too. Hope I can return the favor if you entered a poem too.


    • wtchr
      February 18
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      Thanks Kim

      GREAT AVATAR ! Glad you had a chance to read. Thank you so much for the kind words.

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