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Doors of Bones and Bodies of Clones.

Retaliate the hate, the fate that you gave me,
Anticipate and initiate this slow hand clock,
Love’s gone,
Pollutions in the air,
Thick smoke,
High rope,
Exfoliate this bad disease,
Dying off the clock,
Sewn rock,
Boxing gloves hung up and run,
Red tale foxes,
Cloaked dagger and knows boxes,
Written for words of open barrels and loaded guns.
This street is filled with hatred,
Known close by most and afar by rest,
Bed spreads, clean sheets in this dirty closet,
Doors of bones and bodies of clones,
Razor sharp melodies and tears of copper and gold,
So watch this sky and behold,
Colors bold,
Cigarette burns on this scarred skin,
Taken by the hand and forced to believe,
Conceived and hated,
Retrieved and bated,
Set as a trap for gang bangers and trigger happy rangers,
Rewind this clock and freeze,
Mother fuckers like you don’t get far with me,
‘cause I ain’t cloned and I’ll use this phone,
Take the voices back, smack, use it on your back, thwack, you know it’s gonna hurt.
This city of silver, downgraded and invaded by no bodies like you,
Think you’ll get away with this,
I don’t think so,
Don’t get me pissed,
These kids are my family,
Look after them,
Live for them,
Fight for them,
Die for them,
Leave them alone for both your safeties,
Shoot down once and you’ll learn how to hate me,
Not for long,
Give your letter to john,
‘Cause I’ll take your ass to hell and back again.

Author notes

This is for all ma haters, stay stack so I don't have to stab yalls back!!!

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  • YesterdaysDreams
    February 17, 2009

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    Razor sharp melodies and tears of copper and gold,
    So watch this sky and behold,
    Colors bold,
    Cigarette burns on this scarred skin,
    Taken by the hand and forced to believe,
    Conceived and hated,
    Retrieved and bated,


    great lines here, good job and good luck in the contest


  • Renastyishere
    February 17, 2009

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    I love this one it's amazing! Definitely one of my favorites! Like it might be on the top of the list...

    • Asonine
      February 18, 2009
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      haha I think you say that every time lol

      • Renastyishere
        February 18, 2009
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        Haha well your they're all amazing that's why! Haha.

        • Asonine
          February 18, 2009
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          haha... yeah you dont actually think that so ... lol

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