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Aspirations of Me

When I look to the sky,
Do you know what I see?
I see dreams and goals that are reflections of me,

I like to take time,
To study these aspirations,
To look throughout them,
And think about the celebrations,

The celebrations that I know will come,
When I reach my goals,
In the setting sun,

Family and friends will congratulate me,
On my newfound success,
And know that I truly did my best,

I will look up to the sky,
And find those dreams and goals complete,
And I will see that they helped shape my life,
Helped make it concrete,

I will not stop there,
I will keep moving on,
I will set new dreams that lay upon,
The starry sky,

When you look to the sky,
What do you see?
Are there aspirations of you?
Or aspirations of me?



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