My older sister and I
were talking the other day,
and we laughed at how sometimes
we forget things along the way.
Things you know just drifts away,
and you stand there with
this stupid look on your face.
Age she said that's what it is for sure,
I think sometimes I have aleichem's
I can't remember anything anymore.
We laughed and I told her
we aren't quite there,
I think we have some-timers
first stages of being unaware.
We have got to the point
where cluttered our minds become,
and in this we lose ourselves
and often feel mighty dumb.
Some-timers is when
your mind stops in mid stride,
start writing your drivers license
and get lost that's right.
It's like your in the twilight zone
a part of the mind un used,
and in this vacuum you lose your muse.
Some-timers we all share this indeed,
haven't ever figured it out
yet we all get lost you see.
Just laugh at yourself
and know you are not alone,
cause there are millions out there with that
goofy look upon their face you know.
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so many times, my brother and i sit down and just say, "hey, remember the time when..." and we go off on some random hilarious memory. This is so beautiful, and cute.
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Awesome and true. We all do walk around with that look on our face from time to time. And it's not an age thing>. There are time when my son Joshua get this look like he is lost he was in the middle of telling me how his day at school was and all of sudden he looks at me like he had just lost what he was telling me. Thanks for the read and keep on writing
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I must be ancient thenm cause I forget things all the time in mid stride. Great poem Patty and rather funny as well.
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Well spoken
Blessed are the meek for they shall inherit the Earth. When we stop worrying about our precious Ego's, we will all be better for it.
David XX
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Oh boy can I relate to this. I have so many senior moments I can't even keep count anymore.Everyone seems to see the brighter side of being a sometimer so I just laugh along with them...Great write...mal
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lol nice, i have this sometimes too = P
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LOL Your words are so true Patty. I get so mad at myself sometimes and yet I have to laugh when my kids forget things too! At least I'm not alone.
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LOL great write I think we all get some........I went to the store the other day and got a box of cookies. Just kidding, a great explination of how we get as we mature.
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Yep! I am in that group too
I think I have that some-timers, or as my hubby calls it part-timers I can be in the middle of a sentence, writing something and wooooooooooops there it goes, lost that thought I soooooo know what you mean about that!
Great job on this one!
and love
Nyetta
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a wonderful poem my friend I can so relate to your poem thank you for sharingmaralisa
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