I miss you
i can't help but to see you
every where i go.
But you will be gone
and for that im
internally greatful.
Leave me alone
take away my pain
Leave me alone
and never come back
i miss you
i miss your smile
and i still think of you
every once and a while.
But i need to get over you.
Get on with my life.
there is a new guy
that will take my mind
off of him.
A contest entry
- prewriten contest (MY FRIENDS AND FAMILY) group only by serenity silvermoon.
400 points, ended March 13, 22 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - round contest number one (prewrite) by serenity silvermoon.
510 points, ended September 25, 111 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love is screwed up(Friends only) by xLovingxMyxAngelx.
550 points, ended March 23, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - i miss you. by jayyniecakes..
400 points, ended April 13, 23 entries
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Comments
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hum...interesting, but i like it!
its kinda hard to tell where your coming from, but thats ok. its beautiful just as it is.
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The things that you wrote in the poem were brilliant. It's beautiful and emotional. I love it.
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...... hmm hard to describe the feelings coming from this poem. very good write
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aww devil... this was an amazing poem! i absolutely loved it! the emotions were so neat and defined. i think that everyone can relate to what is said in this piece. there's always going to be a guy in our lives that will cause us hurt i liked this line: "but i need to get over you. get on with life." that was one of the more powerful lines in it. i love reading your work! keep up the amazing work!
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