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A Young Beauty

You still haunt me
Standing memory
Light brown coat
Green scarf
You stood with many
Yet you stood apart

Your eyes so thoughtful
Brown hair flitting in the light wind
Supple and touchable
Skin, smooth and pure
Your features still flushed with youth
You allured me

Barely a Woman
Still just a child
My thoughts were innocent enough
As you stood quietly, mild
A beacon of beauty in the commonplace
Virgin countenance immeasurable in all the haste

You still charm me
Standing memory
Light brown coat
Green scarf
You stood with many
And yet you were apart

Living piece of artistry
Living work of art

Author notes

This was just someone I saw while driving who struck me. She was just standing at a bus stop among the other high school students. I thought she was innocently beautiful.

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  • KeeperDizze
    March 25
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    You and your watcher's gaze. Well done.