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When i see you cry
words cant describe how much i hurt
knowing you are not okay
i whispered in your ear
a sweet tone that's put those
pretty eyes to sleep

all you have to say is STAY

You tell me you love her
yet i can see your troubled soul
crying out for an answer
while she moves on your bestfriend
i hold you tight
i tell you you'll find it
whatever it is

all you have to say is stay

There's a fight
within every fight there's a reason
within every reason there's a solution
Within every solution there's happiness
within happiness there's pain

either way.... just tell me to stay

This is for my Ex Erick .... i really want to be with him but he fucked up big time.... should i give him a chance?

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  • sOuL
    July 19

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    After i read this poem, i have some feelings
    i dont know how to express
    anyway i must say this poem is a nice poem
    specially the last stanza took my breath

  • Wow.

    Of course there is a fight. There is a fight behind every smile, glance, gaze, tear, behind every letter that makes up a word, words in a sentence..there's always a battle. You just have to know who and what you're fighting for.
    Great write hun,.


  • Blissfullhatred silver member
    February 21
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    what he do?


  • Yy13
    February 21

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    Nice poem. As for Erick...your graphic description of his error in judgement does not bode well for a happy relationship. But, we all need to be given a chance!


  • xtayzerx
    February 21

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    hmm

    its says alot.....and as ive said before i will never understand the teenage mind was this erick really that great??? anyway ill stop talking before i offend someone......all the best and hope you can come to an aggreement with your ex bf
    good luck

    ella

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