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Lukewarm Fever

I dream a lovely wholesome sunset,
the one that danced until our night,
when blushing eyes and lingering touches,
would giggle soft into delight.

Your hug so warn melted the igloo,
that grasped my heart as cold as ice.
Love was for once a heated lava,
that played my insides like a dice.

Yours was a kiss unlike another;
a mystic fog, a sunny ray,
a dark eclipse, so rare with beauty,
a rising sun waking my day.

Your heart’s declared the king of passion,
weather it hot or soothing warm,
and in my dreams, so like a baby,
your loves still thunders as the storm.

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Iamthebeatles' Love poem.
Words,
baby, dream, eclipse, fog, igloo, giggle, night, king, love, hug, lava, sunset

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  • Just a terrific use of the word bank, and a real pleasure to read as always.