I'm feeling like a caged wildcat,
Because I'm not where you're at
Being alone just isn't for me,
I long to feel you lustfully
Gentle at first, then hot and passionate
Is where I aim to eventually get
I want to surround you everywhere,
With my sweet love nectar
Brought about only by love and you,
And your full manliness too
Given to one another in true love only,
You'll make me feel more womanly
I crave the burning hot ecstasy,
That can be shared between you and me
A contest entry
- Sensually Yours by jul.
700 points, ended April 2, 24 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I hope you like my poem
Comments
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Very Hot!!! I like this one a lot. Thanks for entering my contest. Best wishes to you.
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Dear Jul: Thanks for reading my poem. I'm really glad that you enjoyed it, and that you thought it was hot too! Love, Janajn xoxo
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ha, yes I like this poem.
I like it because it speaks directly to the reader and that is what poetry ought to be about not some intellectual things which no one understands.
One typo: I want to suround you everywhere,
surounds= surrounds. Good work.
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Dear Terry: Thanks for reading my poem. I have corrected my typo. So very glad you liked it. Love, Janjan xoxo
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