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~February 17, 2009

 

wedges waffled-

 

awaiting the spatula's remark.

spun dreams sprinkled sugar-white

atop appetizing gold sponges

draped and drizzled

with strawberry laden syrup-

sumptuously sweet

lay the memories upon

a clean plate...

 

served solace

in whip cream ideas...

 


 

 

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  • Nickelspring gold member
    February 20

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    OOh, I love this tasty piece. I love the imagery, simple yet poignant.

    KW~


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    February 17

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    Dang!! Now I am hungry!! You have my mouth watering and me smelling sweet maple syrup! Beautifully written.


  • maralisa silver member
    February 17
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    a very tasty poem thank you for sharingmaralisa