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night blooming jasmine

night blooming jasmine
filling air with perfume rare
lightning bug twinkles

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  • Arkbear gold member
    February 17, 2009

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    Hello

     

    *jasmine* is spelled incorrectly -

     

    I like this....the movement around the yard is nice and I can see the visuals just fine.....thank you for entering....God bless,

     

    Bear ~


  • Riftkin gold member
    February 17, 2009
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    This is a wonderful night time haiku,
    can smell the jasmine and see the lightening bugs.