a beautiful dreamer
catching butterflies
keeping possibilities in her hands
a radiant believer
counting stars
always digging a castle in the sands
a guiding voice
humming lullabies
listening for a friend
a comforting inspiration
holding her close
pensive eyes that comprehend
a determined perfectionist
reciting her flaws
focusing her mind on a mistake
a falling sensation
crashing lightly
causing the world to shake
a hopeless romantic
breaking softly
watching happiness in pain
a silent warrior
fighting words
collecting a bucket of rain
once upon a rainbow
she dazzled the darkest skies
once upon the stardust
she shined through dreamy eyes
silently ever after
she's left alone to fade
remembering how she used to be
regretting the mistakes she's made
dimly ever after
she's scarred by her own rusted mind
she holds her light captive
her dreamy eyes are blind
A contest entry
- Tick me off. or please me your choice. by Black Wolf.
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Comments
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thank you for entering but you need to change this part to third person *a comforting inspiration
holding me close* it should read *holding HER close* so it fits in not only with the rest of the write but also with the contest rules
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Thank for entering my contest. but Maybe you should have read the rules. again. It 3rd person or the way of not saying i meaning a me isn't welcomed either.
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