Hand in hand we go
into the dark unknown
with hope but nothing more
and our sadness intertwined.
No light in our eyes
or wings by our side,
just a joint sigh:
alone for all time.
Author notes
I Will Follow You into the Dark
A contest entry
- a quickie! :) by etoile.
825 points, ended February 22, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i'm surprised not many people used this song, but i'm happy someone did. i love this song and i love what you wrote from it.
the imagery is beautiful.
thanks for entering and goodluck
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I like this poem. It's short and simple but therein lies its charm.When I read the last four lines in particlar, I can even hear the music. I guess it's a very evocative and inspiring piece of music ;I too thought about writing for this song.
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