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Uncle Jerry's fishing shack

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Down by the lake, where  cat tails grew thick
with a fishing pole made of a long willow stick
a thermos of coffee a creel and a book
when ever I came there, that's where I'd look

For old Uncle Jerry, his pipe and his pole
at the spot he loved the best, his fishing hole
whistling that secret tune he only knew
just fishing for catfish, catching a few

His hat was of straw his jeans were quite worn
the dock was in sad shape, old and forlorn
but Uncle was happiest when he was there,
fishing the day away never a care

Aunty would holler at dark from the shack
for Uncle to get a move on and get back
as the biscuits were baking and coffee was hot
so get her those fish that she knew he'd have caught

For Aunty knew Uncle loved fish batter fried
with her mashed potatoes and corn on the side
All cooked up that day in the shack on the shore
with it's saggy old porch and it's squeaky screen door

and Uncles old pickup he'd had for so long
all creaky and rusty but still running strong
parked by the porch where his hunting dog lay
by the rocker that Anty napped in everyday

when supper was over and the dishes were through
while Uncle told stories he swore were all true
of the catfish he'd caught in that old fishing hole
though I'd heard them often they never grew dull

I go back sometimes to the lake where it stood
that old fishing shack on the edge of the wood
the memories will flood back the second I do
with longings that childhood never was through

And, old fisherman still took fish from the lake
and carried them home on a line and a stake
like Old Uncle Jerry who I still can see there
just sitting and fishing with never a care.

Author notes

Special thanks to Sweet Impatience for her picture that brought back the memories of the fishing shack by Vancouver Lake I knew as a kid.

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  • Emile
    February 24, 2009
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    Very Good

    The poem flows with a pleasant beat and the words say everything by evoking thoughts within the reader's consciousness. This is a well penned poem that not only describes a state of mind , but makes an attempt to instill such thoughts within the reader's mind through great imagery and triggered emotions.


  • Amera gold member
    February 19, 2009

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    Wow! What a great story penned in verse. I think I know Uncle Jerry! Love the imagery in this poem.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Di Shirley
    February 19, 2009

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    Beautifully penned.

    I could smell the fish cooking
    Feel the cool evening air.
    Yet I have never been to your country.
    How I would love to go there.

    From the land downunder.


  • Sandygram silver member
    February 18, 2009

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    Delightful

    Sounds like you had some great times there. Thank you for sharing your happy memories with us. A lovely picture indeed. Your words bring it to life. Take care. Hugs and smiles, Sandy


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    February 18, 2009

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    Wow what a wonderful story! I was hooked in as well, as I always am with the stories you tell so well in verse
    You have me wondering if that old shack is still there.
    Thanks so much for sharing this beautiful story.
    Gaylene


  • BonnieQ silver member
    February 18, 2009

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    Got Me, Hook Line & Sinker!

    Oh, Ed, this is fabulous! Who needs the picture? You painted it even better with words and without so much as one boring line. Uncle's old truck reminds me of Maggie, that's Steel Magnolia, my 1977 Pontiac Grand Prix. She might be old and a bit worn looking but runs like new money, only 105,000 actual miles on her. Never could justify replacing her.

    This should be in a contest, for it surely would bring in the GOLD, hook line and sinker!

    Much luv & hugs, SisBon


  • Denerica
    February 17, 2009
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    Wonderful Memories seen here in your sentimental write, once again vivid imagery. Blessings.

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