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She

Deep blue, drowning in memories
that float like bubbles to the surface,
bursting dreams in a rainbow of colour.

On the surface she seems as nothing
But deep down is where she hides
with her dreams, a rainbow of colour.

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  • HereComesTheSun
    February 17

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    so im not sure where the color came from but that is okay becuase inspiration for you is different then for me and this was still a super stellar piece that grabs the heart and tells a story. well done thanks for entering