on a night
where the ice
was right
running down
the street
escaping
your heat
with our child
still snug inside me
your eyes wild
chasing me
my face is
washed out
my voice
it shouts
"help! help!"
but it goes unheard
let out a yelp
worthless
you chase me faster
fearless
of the consequences
throw yourself
with every thing you have
pushing me off the shelf
i fall
you sit in shock
i try to crawl
i scream and cry
at the pain
our new life, deny
how could you?
look what you've done
what did you do?
this night
the death of our first born
killed with all your might
never ending is this plight
Author notes
what is there for me to say further.
this all kinda sums it up.
has it ever happened to you?
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amazing...this is why you are one of my favorite poets...because you put it all right out there!!
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putting it all out there is the only way i know how to write.
thank you so much.
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very powerful, u penned this so well, sent a shiver down my spine......not many writers do that. its so hard to know what to say here....i loved your work,it spoke fro the soul, but im so sorry that you had to go through that , hopefully there will be som
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this made me cry. i lost my first born also due to miscarage, nothing as violent as your experiance. my heart goes out to you. ps~i'll kill that jackass for you if you want P
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thanks, i'm sorry to hear that i made you cry.
i just needed to vent. abortion has been a current topic of deskcution lately in my life. and it brings my memories back.
no need to kill him though, he has been out of my life of almost a year.
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