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Flaws

So willing am I
To your cause
I feel the need
To point out my flaws
Im judgemental
Oh I know
I need to lay off drug
Im so gullible
Self assured

Where did you go now
I feel stupid
and outragious
Guess thats a part of me you'll never know

Lay me down to sleep
tonight i will be your everything
I know that i
fucked up
I know I will until the end

So laying low
Hello how low
I feel stupid
and outragious
here I am now
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