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igloose.

ice my mellow niceties
to spark a sapless soul
my skin; a sitar string so thin
your fingers'  fine allure sings
with softest of the taps -
what heart would not collapse?

enchant my fallen fantasies
to fix a fissured frame
my eyes; a sunlight slit so sweet
your lyircs' low azure speaks
in language tear-laced -
what heart would not embrace?






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