stupid girl
they all said
bad memories
in my head
another heart break
come and gone
just another
sad love song
in the middle
of a parental fight
being the rope
that they pull real tight
just another moment gone wrong
another place
another sad love song
all these memories
up in my head
so this ones no different
then the last one said
its all the same
just another bad memory
in my brain
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- Do you have emotions? by Forgotten Anomaly.
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Comments
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wow!! very good.. i love the way you expressed your emotions into this write.. i feel the hurt and anger... great job!!! I loved it.. keep up the amazing work and good luck in my contest!!
Shannon*Leah
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The poem while having a good flow to it seemed a little lacking, I don't know, as though it could have used more emotion, more depth. Just another bad memory... don't I know that one though. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
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you have not followed any of the rules stated on the contest page so i am disqualifying this write. you are invited to take another look and try again. thank you for your time. viyanna rosemarie
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