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Without A Doubt

(kind of a slower song, just singin and guitar if that helps you imagine...)

Without a doubt you're the best man that I've ever met,
and with/out a doubt we'll be up late on the telephone

and I'll listen as you sing that song you wrote
about a girl you used to know.
I'll smile and laugh as you sing out of key,
tell you it sucks but it still means a lot to me.
You'll sing on and keep strumming along
as I divert my eyes to a poster on the wall.

Because without a doubt you're the best man that I've ever met,
and with/out a doubt we'll be up late on the telephone.

I remember the day you came a minute late,
you were new and didn't know what quite to say.
I stared at you, but you kept your eyes on your feet
as you walked past me on to your seat.
I wrote a note and you told me your name
and what you said that day will always stay with me.

Because without a doubt you're the best man that I've ever met,
and with/out a doubt we'll be up late on the telephone.
(little guitar part...)
(Speed up)
You lean in and whisper three little words in my ear,
I shake my head and smile even though I want you near.
I wish I could but I can't stop these feelings that I feel,
and I know that what's between us will always be real.
I wrap my arms around you and never want to let go,
but I find I have to as the words begin to flow

Because without a doubt you're the best man that I've ever met,
(honey) and with/out a doubt we'll be up late on the telephone,
singing that song you wrote
about a girl you know...

Author notes

Wrote this a few weeks ago, just came up with the last verse before the the chorus plays again...not the best in my opinion, but let me know what you think. Im trying to write a guitar piece for this, but im also working on one for Hardest Goodbye, so it might take a while. lemme know if you have any ideas!
P.S. i don't think musicians get enough credit, i can not make guitar sound good with a song at all! I RESPECT U IF YOUR IN A BAND!!!
name- Upperworld06

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  • Darkwell
    April 5

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    I love this and I totally would love to hear it as a song, i can even hear the guitar i could feel your emotions and see the two of you together in class and everything. Awesome! high marks


    • upperworld06
      April 6
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      thanks, i finished the lead and back up guitar, but i don't think it really fits the song...idk, im trying to get my friend to sing it but i doubt she'll do it = (


  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    March 14

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    Great lyrics...

    Wonderful rhythm & flow that one can imagine music playing with...
    Another awesome, heartfelt piece...
    Keep up the good work...
    Well done!!!


  • FleetingImage
    March 9

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    beautiful song, it made my heart smile. i could almost hear the song as i read this and all i cold do was smile...GL


  • Veronica Leigh
    March 7

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    Hey, I saw your contest and wanted to enter, but you have a lot of entries already so I wanted to at least come read your song. This is actually pretty good. I really liked it and can almost hear the music as I read. All I write are songs (with my guitar too) I'm pretty impressed. I know I couldn't write this when I was 15. Great job and keep working on it. The guitar part just takes practice.

    The only thing I could say right now is that you missed a d on the 4th line. It should read, girl you USED to know.

    Great job and I'll probably be back to look at this again

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