The most wonderful thing,
is seeing you in the morning.
When you're there,
Acting cool is the automatic default,
because the rest of my body goes numb.
And the way you stare at me when i walk by,
Is is because you feel the way that i do?
If only I had a birthday coming up,
so i could wish for what i truly want.
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don't judge. i thought the poem wasn't THAT bad, but o well. tell me what you think.
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hio
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Huh, this is really good. I liked it.
One thing I would change is the usage of lowercase i's. I don't think it looks that good.
I like the ending the best.
*KT*
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thnks. its my first poem in while.
and yeah, about the "i"s, i just didn't really feel like it that day but o well. :/
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