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Waking Up in Dreamland

I fall deeper,
down into the dark,

waking up into an endless sleep,
where im carressed by my thoughts.

here, thoughts are the winds that blow around me,
and an evervescent sky flows to life with my emotions.

waters of calm rise and fall on the crest of mind,
its silence in the eye of the storm.

blades of grass burst forth,
as hope that fertilizes the ground.

flowers bloom with childish innocence,
wilting with age, but never dying.

my world grows darker,
fading into reality,

as i continue to fall,
deeper into dreamland.

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i really wanted to describe the mind, i like it.

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