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Manufactured Dream

the wheels of my mind churn and turn
setting my mind to work.
It manufactures my dreams,
from the files of my imagination,
starting the end of a new day.

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Manufactured Dream - i liked my poem.

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  • Lyre-Bird-
    February 17

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    Firstly I would like to thank you for entering and following the rules.....

    A good take on the prompt... straight to the point of the minds cogs.
    'from the files of my imagination' great line

    well done

    Good Luck
    Lyre-Bird-
    Tracey