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After the bush fire

The fire,that has raged all day,
has now been extinguished.
Some, lucky to be alive,weep
at how little is left,
of what they once called home.

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Sweltering dusk

A thought for all those who lost house and home, family members, animals, and business premises in the Victorian bushfires.

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  • Lyre-Bird-
    February 17, 2009

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    Firstly I would like to thank you for entering and following the rules.....

    A well written piece..... You have used the prompt well, a thought of sadness that many share.

    well done

    Good Luck
    Lyre-Bird-
    Tracey


    • Shenton silver member
      February 17, 2009
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      Tracey

      Thankyou for your very complimentary comments, and for your generous applause.

      Best wishes from Perth W A.

      Shenton