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To the one i love...

When you were near
Your love gave me
Wings to fly among the birds
Now the pain I have to bear
Is impossible to put into words

When you were here
You were the one
That held my heart in one piece
Now you're gone I fear
The ache in my heart will never cease

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  • Remix Factory
    March 7, 2009

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    SOUNDS GREAT AND LUV'ED FROM EVERY BEAT OF MY HEART, SAD BUT REALLY GOOD, REALLY MADE ME FEEL AND ALOT AND I LIKED THIS FULL PIECE !!!!!!!

    RF


  • LoveHate
    February 23, 2009
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    I can relate! great job

  • LonelyWolf Tasagka
    February 20, 2009

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    So sad heartbreaking. Its genuie with its flow and crisp words. It truth with its emotions. Good write.

    Sincerely,
    XxDragonWolfxX


  • XxVampyressxX
    February 17, 2009

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    that is really deep and emtional. i love your poem a lot. i felt every part of it. its true for so many of us and we feel a lot of the ache when the one we love disappears or leaves