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The Day the World Went Crazy

The game began as the apple was launched!
The impromptu ball sped along the empty field
As players began to chase, the green frog got to it first,
Only to be eaten by the cat, surely a foul!
The monkey hit him with a yoyo and knocked him
Into the next world to the urges of bystanders.
The doll giggled and whispered to zebra who nodded
And trampled the monkey who was celebrating too hard
Drinking wine fresh off the vine while dancing in a hat.
“So much for monkey” said the Queen of the pie stall
The octopus then x-rayed zebra for lumps
While we drank water and tea, that was our job
As the red sun set leaving a deep night like black ice.

Author notes

lol can't resist - used them all again
Apple, ball, cat, doll, empty, frog, green, hat, ice, job, kite, lump, monkey, night, octopus, pie, queen, red, sun, tea, urge, vine, water, x-ray, yoyo, zebra

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  • new born
    February 26

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    My friend is sitting next to me right now, and she loves this. I like it a lot too. It's hilariously random and fun. I'm bookmarking this. It put a smile on my face, great write.

  • lol i love this poem my brother you did a wonderful job i love how you used you amations i loved reading this one it was very great to read thanks for sharing my brother

  • Utopian Evolution
    February 17

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    HAHA! ... oh my god my friend ... I congratulate you for this piece, this is something I know I couldn’t do ... wonderful job with this indeed!

    G.


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    February 17
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    Wow, this was trippy! Weird at its finest. I loved it. Great work!


  • StarEyes
    February 17

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    Sounds crazy to me! what a fun read! I think this is just what I needed today Great job!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta

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