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that feeling (gold & silver)



He strums at musical strings while she sways to his rhythm
to her it isn’t about sound; it is about the feeling that washes over her
as he smiles and plays with more passion and fervor
with the encouragement of this street corner ballerina
who will never hear a note

 

 

 

 

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Prompt ~ deaf elegance

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  • Danna Hobart
    March 2

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    Awww, this is beautiful and sad, and yet encouraging at the same time. There are more ways to experience music than with our ears.

    Thank you for entering.


  • Topaze gold member
    February 17
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    He, he , he , he, as he hears every word you say.


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    February 17

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    Oh my ~

    I have tears in my eyes from the sheer beauty of this! I just adore this; she is deaf yet dances for him ... that is priceless beauty right there and my heart swells

    You're incredible
    Best of Luck darlin
    ♥
    Stay safe
    Love to You
    ~Manda


  • maralisa silver member
    February 17
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    a wonderful take on the promt good luck in teh contestmaralisa


  • Lyre-Bird-
    February 17

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    Firstly I would like to thank you for entering and following the rules.....

    This is a great take on the prompt....
    I like where you have taken this title, feeling really escapes to the reader as this is read.


    well done

    Good Luck
    Lyre-Bird-
    Tracey


  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    February 17

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    What an exquisite take. I love the way you penned this, drawing emotion and feeling into words

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