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Frozen Images

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The beautiful smiles on the faces of her friends

Racing through her mind, solidified there; or at least she wishes

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Frozen images of flames accompanied by the echoing screams 

Burned into her subconsious; The sorrowful night of fun, games, drinks and drugs

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The drive home and the surviour; The beautiful smiles on the faces of her friends 

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  • Lyre-Bird-
    February 17, 2009
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    Firstly I would like to thank you for entering and following the rules.....

    This is a great take on the prompt.... Strong 5 lines written,
    'The beautiful smiles on the faces of her friends ' this line is very powerful, a message to all is spoken....

    well done

    Good Luck
    Lyre-Bird-
    Tracey