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Twinkle, twinkle, little star

Twinkle, twinkle, little star,
How I wonder what you are.
Up above the world so high,
Like a diamond in the sky.
Twinkle, twinkle, little star,
How I wonder what you are!

When the blazing sun is gone,
When there's nothing he shines upon,
Then you show your little light,
Twinkle, twinkle, through the night.
Twinkle, twinkle, little star,
How I wonder what you are!

In the dark blue sky so deep
Through my curtains often peep
For you never close your eyes
’Til the morning sun does rise
Twinkle, twinkle, little star
How I wonder what you are

Twinkle, twinkle, little star
How I wonder what you are

Author notes

it has been always hard for me to sleep in the night without seeing any stars they just makes me comfortable and helps me to remember that no matter how darkness is strong you only need a simple little light to see the right pass and when I was little the stars where my only family

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  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    February 27

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    Very nice. From the AN I can see why this nursery rhyme meant so much to you as a kid. Congratulations on the bronze cup.

    Mike


  • Anonymous Spark
    February 21

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    Umm not to sound rude but you cant take someones poem and get points for the write

    you cant do that since its against the rules


  • Kal-El
    February 19
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    I really wanted to give the credit for the one that created that awesome peice but I'm not sure who wrote it since I didn't look for the lyrics I've just wrote it cause I've memorize it from a long time ago and I like to know who wrote it anyway since I don't have much time to do the research I hope someone that knows can tell me plz thanks all


  • Ryan79
    February 18
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    Nice rhyme and rhythm. I love the way it fits to gether and flows so well. Brilliant piece.


  • mysterious.angel
    February 17
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    huh

    ok little confused but im sure you had your reasons


  • TheQueenOfPoetry
    February 17

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    Wonderful.

    I love this poem.
    This is so beautiful, and creative.
    I love it.
    Thanks for much for sharing.
    I love how you added to it.
    I love how you mentioned that you love to look at the stars.
    How wonderful. ****

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