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what we could never see



This house stands
with many a stain scratched beneath its surface ~

where summer crowned with drifting orchard bloom
wrapped her hands around the chaos -
and Autumn threw her yellow rain
in between the breaths
taken
deeply

once

And white in winter like a marble tomb
encasing this time-eaten brow ~
old wounds speak - a worn and shattered tune

bound with silver bars
the tears heap like the drift of night
against our door ~

and still
we'll go walking in the dead leaves

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  • Malabu
    February 19, 2009

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    we see the trail after the leaves have blown away
    and the pathway of heart finds itself, naked against the winter sun
    beneath two feet are buds of spring

    so be my thoughts here


  • mysticstorm gold member
    February 18, 2009

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    Amazing! I can not do this justice with a comment, but it reminds me of sweet Sam at the moment which breakis my heart.

    Thank you for sharing!
    mystic