Memories beckoned true heartstring to rise
cascading ashore, in forceful tides
distinctive beauty, captured soul
moonlight gleams, indigo glow
briny air breathes love’s sigh
surging swells adrift
no more, for I've
now returned
to my
home
Author notes
14. Form challenge: Write an Etheree (or any variation thereof) using the prompt "Born by the sea side".
pic credit: http://www.sunshinetheatre.org/sunshineimages/08-09_season/captain-on-beach_web.jpg
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A contest entry
- Book Launch Party by Errant Panther.
1100 points, ended March 3, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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How gorgeous is this!!!
I love the Etheree form and this one is so amazing!
COngrats on your bronze bff!
This is one of the best I have read from you, and that is saying so much...adding to my list that is gettin' long
Lynda (bff)
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wonderful piece for the chosen option, true to reverse etheree form and holds a certain air of captivation just like the flow of an evening tide.
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very nice words full of emotion, good luck
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The vivid imnagery in this piece is poetry to bring a smile and a sigh. It's said that home is where the heart is and your poem tells us where yours is.
It's a beautiful poem, well formed, smooth flowing. It has a sureal feel with a longing fulfilled.
Best wishes in the contest
Dee
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Such a very lovely piece of tranquility in thought, an almost sadness submerged within - as heart finds destination. Great take on the image prompt! Well penned!
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You've well-expressed your thoughts in Etheree form.
Good luck to you in this contest.
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Beautiful Sis!
Thanks for sharing such a lovely piece.
Much love and light, bro Timothy
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So Beautuiful
Oh I love this form. And your poem is perfect for the contest prompt. I was going to try and do one but it could not compare to yours. You deserve Gold gor this. Stunning imagery. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Excellent
The sea is my home, only place to offer true relaxtion for me, the roaring of the waves, restlessness of the ocean. Wonderful thoughts you have shared. delight to read and meditate.
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Words, soft, gentle and deep. Nice written Etheree whatever variation it is. Touching, this is very touching poetry.
~Sonja~
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Good luck with this-lovely lovely lovely.
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